Wednesday, March 19, 2014

Let's Get Rocked

This excerpt from a story about a hot-air balloon pilot who was killed in a Georgia storm is written in the past tense. The proof is in the -ed pudding. Weve got spidered, floated, sucked and ... rocking.

Rocking?

The sentence lacks parallel structure. It would have rocked if rocking had been rocked.

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