Now drift over to the image at the top right. I’m going to
put you on the spot: Can you spot the words that aren’t in the right spot? Go
on — give it the old college try. (1)
When paragraphs, words or even letters are, like a vending
machine at a fleabag motel, out of order, meaning is lost. It might as well have
its picture posted on telephone poles around town. (2)
Don’t be that guy. Nobody likes him; he makes everyone
uncomfortable. Put him in his place. While you’re at it, put college in its place. That’d make me happy. My disposition
improves when positioning improves. (3)
Today’s post will be presented in such a way that the lead,
like a Mob-hit corpse, will be buried. It’s part of my plan to show that all
elements must be in their proper place. Otherwise, confusion reigns. (4)
Did you guess college
and among? Spot on! In this
example of “disorderly conduct,” college and among have been
transposed. This simple swap has created an unpleasing arrangement of parts.
Harmony is lost. The sentence no longer makes sense. It’s your drunken uncle at
Christmas. (5)
There is a place for everything, and everything in its
place. The calm comes before the storm. The Prisoner of Azkaban comes after The Chamber of Secrets. Appetizers come ahead of the main course. You try
something, and then you knock it. Looking comes before leaping. Autumn follows
summer. First comes love, then comes marriage. The wedding precedes the
honeymoon. The chicken comes before the egg … or
maybe not. I’m not so sure about that last one. But you catch my drift. (6)
Editor’s note: To make sense of today’s post, read the
paragraphs in the following sequence: 4-2-6-1-5-3. That’s an order!
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