This newspaper article offers four tips to eliminate bacteria from
totes. Unfortunately, the paper doesn’t use parallel structure, which is a kind
of repetition using similar (or parallel) grammatical elements. The tips are presented
by using the base form of a verb, in its present tense, in all spots — except
one. To eliminate bacteria, we
wash
and
clean and
wrap and
use and …
avoiding.
To eliminate errors:
FREQUENTLY CHECK your work on your monitor.
CLEAN ALL AREAS where you place unnecessary endings.
AVOID LEAVING extra letters on a word’s trunk.
WHEN EDITING, examine the article closely before sending it
to the printer, and use two eyes to identify mistakes.
To maintain rhythm, let’s stay away from
avoiding, which is unnecessarily toting
an –
ing.
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